Soyala Amaya

All right, I enjoy love poems mostly, but I don't agree with these American idea's of love. Butterflies and rainbows? That's an elementary school crush, not true love. Real love ...

Interesting, but not one of your best. The last stanza was much more...you. I get the feeling you wanted to write about a suicide, but couldn't think of the words, ...

Heya fire, long time no critique, eh? Well, to start off, this was pretty good. Over all, I liked it, but you lose me partway through it. The third stanza ...

Ack! You went to Spain nate? I did too, just about a month ago! I loved! I went to Barcelona, madrid, and Zaragosa, what about you? I have pages and ...

Hey Chev, how's it going? See you're starting toget over your writers block, but not quite yet. This is nice, like everyone's said, but there's no real point. All I ...

Powerful, intense, and painful. Eating disorders are no joke, and you have taken such a horrible mental disorder and put it into words in a way that I can't get ...

Thanks for the nice reviews, I made some changes, but some things I left. The imagery with the pennies from heaven is becausde that'sthe song that was on my radio ...

Interesting...not my fav, but interesting. Nit picky time though love. First stanza, do you need winter christmans It seems kind of redundant tome. If it's christmas, it's winter. And I'm ...

Rhyming couplets about suicide...how...original. Please, Lord and Lady, I hope you can hear the sarcasm. THis, well, is not the best I've seen in here. Not, neccesarily, the worst, but ...

I feel so...teenagerish. So very very teenagerish. Urgh. I hate it when i feel like that. But, here it is. Pissed off, feeling like crap, driving away from my overreactive ...

...sometimes I really do think I hate you. Beautiful. Lovely. Deep. Meaningful. Only problem is with the second stanza, did you mean to make that a 'your'? It doesn't make ...

Bubble! Long time no see my love! Yay! And, as always, decidedly delightful. I see nothing wrong with this...which is amazing...I always have something mean to say...yea, I've kind of ...

Gotta say it, and frankly I'm a little depressed that he has gotten so little recognition in here...GO ALEXANDER! Who else could defeat a country that was OVER A MOUNTAIN ...

Wow...how long has it been since I've actually critiqued or posted something? Tis strange, I know. But I am back! Rar! Anyway, I like some of the imagery in this ...

First off, most people would call the Book of Mormon an even less legitimate work than the bible, and would laugh harshly at you for bringing it up at all, ...